Tuesday, February 22, 2011

nearly this weeks magpie - but it isn't.

the light has sometimes painful burning but I miss the sun on my up turned face.

the
light
has
sometimes
painful
burning
but
I
miss
the
sun
on
my
up
turned
face.



                                           the
                              light
                                                    has
                      sometimes
                                           painful
                                                        burning
                                                                        but
                                             I miss
                                                            the sun                           
                                                                           on my
                                               up turned
                           face.


 - Hoc Scripsi
From the mind of at
what I felt it was all about:

13 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:04 AM

    Spring is soon to arrive!!!

    I may not be posting any longer, but I will always read your words..always..

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  2. Kristen HaskellFebruary 22, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    You did not need the photo to convey the photo so perfectly. I know a few poets in Chicago. Do you Michael Robins?

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  3. HelenFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    Most clever of you ...

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  4. Judy RoneyFebruary 22, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    A timely poem of longing. Cool!http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/

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  5. MartinFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    Missing the warmth, too.

    Poetry24…where news is the Muse

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  6. Tumblewords:February 22, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    I can feel the longing, the yearning for that which isn't here.

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  7. JinksyFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:04 PM

    Indeed - nearly a jigsaw, but not...

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  8. signed...bkmFebruary 22, 2011 at 10:02 PM

    Oh lovely and thoughtful...puzzle piece...bkm

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  9. ReflectionsFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:52 PM

    Pieced together, yet solitary pics scattering words well.

    Love yout take on this one.

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  10. Tess KincaidFebruary 24, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    Sun? What is sun?

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  11. Brother OllieFebruary 28, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    There is hope in this one. Yes JB.

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  12. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 2, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    whaT A FUN WORD CONSTRUCTION..
    creative magpie.

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  13. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 2, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    welcome join poets rally week 39, share a free or old random poem, make new poetic friends, have your work fully represented by the end of the rally..


    thanks for the time.
    Happy Writing.
    Hope to see you in.
    xoxox

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