leave the top halfopen
that the children
may see
on tiptoe
and
dream
in
color
- Hoc Scripsi
prompt/Image from Magpie tales Mag #36
chicago poetry. poetry for a people. poetry for a moment. poetry to satiate the need. poetry of an american outlaw. poetry for the best words in their best order. poetry by Jhon Baker
leave the top half
That's perfect.
ReplyDeleteAnd thoughtful...
Pearl
I agree with Pearl: perfection.
ReplyDeleteYou know.. i would have said something corny like"
ReplyDelete"honey, you burned the brisket again, airing out the joint"
You created magic...
Not only a perfect bit of writing, but a great door as well. I haven't seen one of those for years...
ReplyDeleteThank you all, now the challenge - a title, something about the door style - an old stable door perhaps?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful bit of writing, Jhon.
ReplyDeleteWow! It's beautiful, I love it.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this..what a great piece of advice...as long as we're talking about windows and not clothing :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet this is, tender thoughtful write,
ReplyDeletea lovely magpie.
Cheers,
Joanny
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