
open
that the children
may see
on tiptoe
and
dream
in
color
- Hoc Scripsi
prompt/Image from Magpie tales Mag #36
chicago poetry. poetry for a people. poetry for a moment. poetry to satiate the need. poetry of an american outlaw. poetry for the best words in their best order. poetry by Jhon Baker
That's perfect.
ReplyDeleteAnd thoughtful...
Pearl
I agree with Pearl: perfection.
ReplyDeleteYou know.. i would have said something corny like"
ReplyDelete"honey, you burned the brisket again, airing out the joint"
You created magic...
Not only a perfect bit of writing, but a great door as well. I haven't seen one of those for years...
ReplyDeleteThank you all, now the challenge - a title, something about the door style - an old stable door perhaps?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful bit of writing, Jhon.
ReplyDeleteWow! It's beautiful, I love it.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this..what a great piece of advice...as long as we're talking about windows and not clothing :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet this is, tender thoughtful write,
ReplyDeletea lovely magpie.
Cheers,
Joanny
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