tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post5783095214582383146..comments2023-05-25T08:13:49.192-05:00Comments on the platitudes of willful resemblance: Magpie #51Jhon Bakerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05952691262605706711noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-33102262887809617792011-02-09T09:19:10.028-06:002011-02-09T09:19:10.028-06:00"With Shoulders Back" is all I seem to ..."With Shoulders Back" is all I seem to be able to come up with...KMShearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10633598906724604369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-83029127065575223412011-02-07T20:49:15.918-06:002011-02-07T20:49:15.918-06:00I humbly thank you all for these kind words - I am...I humbly thank you all for these kind words - I am quite glad that connected with it. now it only needs a title... any offerings??Jhon Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05952691262605706711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-5881896769263774642011-02-07T19:41:26.467-06:002011-02-07T19:41:26.467-06:00Really good!
"...though I do not walk so muc...Really good! <br />"...though I do not walk so much as sway, pitch<br />or stagger." I like this line a great deal!Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-20264557335724401632011-02-07T13:25:40.892-06:002011-02-07T13:25:40.892-06:00Beautiful piece. (It did bring to mind the Seinfel...Beautiful piece. (It did bring to mind the Seinfeld episode about the girl who didn't swing her arms when she walked.)Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-2505743119781963842011-02-05T22:31:00.876-06:002011-02-05T22:31:00.876-06:00nice writing, I really like the asking in the seco...nice writing, I really like the asking in the second piece though ....sway, pitch or stagger..<br /><br />a sense of hope from the first piece to the second...and that one is not alone...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-62655444061717695832011-02-05T20:45:59.997-06:002011-02-05T20:45:59.997-06:00I enjoyed this, Jhon, especially "perplexed b...I enjoyed this, Jhon, especially "perplexed but not quite daunted"....and the picturesque description ofyour walking.........good poem. Glad you found your way to Poets United:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-59303448230325479942011-02-05T18:49:02.214-06:002011-02-05T18:49:02.214-06:00walking with your words is fantastic.
love your t...walking with your words is fantastic.<br /><br />love your take here.<br />beautiful poetry.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-59476256508323094072011-02-04T17:14:05.000-06:002011-02-04T17:14:05.000-06:00Jhon, I really like this.. It reads smooth and it ...Jhon, I really like this.. It reads smooth and it makes me want to know "him" more.. maybe take a walk with him..<br />Very nice Magpie!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-55353719002352005492011-02-04T15:00:26.803-06:002011-02-04T15:00:26.803-06:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353401673753574177.post-40952642370100767512011-02-04T12:28:39.560-06:002011-02-04T12:28:39.560-06:00Love the bit about spilling coffee on not-new shoe...Love the bit about spilling coffee on not-new shoes.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.com